Wednesday, October 27, 2010
Horvath hate mail
This one rule is ruining my life, unforgivables. now, there isn't just one, their multiple. They're like mass nouns uncountable. The worst part is if you commit one of the horrid unforgivables you automatically get a zero. Yes, a zero, but if you fix it then Mr.Horvath re-grades it, and will most likely find some other careless mistake that will haunt you for the rest if your 8th grade life. Everyday i enter Horvath's class worried for what lies ahead, because he gave me my first, dare i say it, F in my life. Luckily for me any way it didn't bring my perfect A+ average down much. I had a 100 in his impossible class and now i have a 93 an A. Now, that A may seem like a great grade to you especially sense he gives us a ton of homework all do in a short period of time, and i have managed to get a 100 on each and every homework except that one, but that's not what I'm building toward. What I'm trying to say is that that A can be the difference of me going to Harvard or Columbia. So every night i do my homework and check it twice for Horvath knows if it's wrong or right. I should've taken my friends literally when they said that no one ever has a perfect average in his class . I will make it my goal, no my mission, no my destiny to get a 100 average on my report card. Many have tried, but few, if any have succeeded.
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If someone could take the time to comment on my work i would appreciate it. I would like to know what you think of my writing. Your comment doesn't have to be that long.
ReplyDeletethis was an O.K. piece of work, not a real great piece with alot of literary valua, but i liked it becasue it was a different topic
ReplyDeleteI completely agree with you when you talk about how ridiculous the unforgivable rules are, and I don't like them at all either; the writing in this was good and it was easy to relate to.
ReplyDeleteummm personally i think that this was kind of rude and that he is just preparing you for high school. I think that if you think this is bad then you won't be able to stand next year....
ReplyDeleteAlthough I think this year, language arts is a very tough class...it is preparing us for high school and even college so I agree with anna too!
ReplyDeleteYeah I agree with Anna and Zoe... but, everyone entitled to their own opinion, to improve your writing I think you should expand on those ideas and put more `why` into it.
ReplyDeleteI Agree with you when your talking about this horrid unforgivble rules because the same thing happens to me.I understand you dont like the unforgiveables but why did you write this?
ReplyDeleteI agree with the unforgivables, but along with Anna that was rude. He is just preparing us for what high school. High school is going to be equaly as hard.
ReplyDeleteThis is a good piece of literature, but you should be grateful you have an A at least, he's only preparing us and we can't always get what we want as a grade, and you obviously had done something wrong to deserve that grade. You don't get graded in the real world.. so except it.
ReplyDeletePersonally, I think you we're bragging or exaggerating a little too much and i totally agree with Anna.
ReplyDeleteI most definitely agree with moooniizx5, Zoe, and Anna. It is kinda rude. But it was an interesting story. It wasn't the the best, but it was't the worst. I hope you get your A+ though!!
ReplyDeleteThis piece was not very interesting because of the lack of literary value, as said sean. It had potential, but it was not perfectly executed.
ReplyDeleteLike many others, I didn't like the piece because it wasn't interesting. I'm not trying to rag on you but I don't understand the point. If you are going to write about it add some figurative language and some writing tricks and make it more interesting. I think it would make it better.
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