My second day on the job and I might not live to see the night. “Pew Pew”! Bullets are flying around me and are coming out of nowhere. “Ough” I’m hit! I look down to see two red stains spreading on my chest. The next thing I know I fall to the ground, and the last thing I see is apples red as my blood, falling around me in the apple field.
24 Hours Before
I arrive in Paris with so much money I am like a money factory. I am here because I am trying to catch an Armenian arms dealer. His name is Nicolai Monokov and he is very dangerous so I have to be extra careful. He has been sending arms over to the UK for 5 years now, and no one has been able to catch him; he is a ghost. The guns he sends are like armies, strong, well- made, and scary. His right hand man is named Victor who is 6’ 11” tall and 250 pounds of all muscle. Victor’s muscles are so big they look like they could be people who walk and talk. Victor is a suspect in over a dozen deaths but we cannot link him to anything, mostly because the witnesses keep mysteriously disappearing. They are dangerous people, and I, Roger Walters and a few other guys from MI6 are going after them.
I will start by tailing Victor to see where he leads me. We are after naughty Nicolai again because we intercepted a shipment of nice, new, never used MP5s from France. We are here in Paris because we have a credible, valuable source in the criminal world telling us that he is going to sell 30 state of the art AK47s to an Irish terrorist named Ryan Mcmallaman. It may be risky but we are going to take out Ryan and replace him with me because I was born in Ireland and look surprisingly like him. I think that I can do my job and do it right.
Taking Ryan is an easy operation, yet what we at MI6 are worried about is that Nicolai will find out, cancel the deal, and then leave the country. What we do is when Ryan is walking with his two bodyguards; we stop them, and replace them with two of my own “bodyguards”. “Arrf Muuuum” barks their guard dog right before we tranquilize it. My two “bodyguards” are senior field agents who are evaluating my performance on my first day of work. Next we set up a meeting with Nicolai to bust him. We have less time to catch him now because sooner or later Nicolai will find out that Ryan is busted and he will leave town. I find Nicolai’s phone number on Ryan’s phone and call him to set up a meet. We agree on a meet in an apple field and we’re going to do the meet tomorrow afternoon. I will take a colt pistol yet I will not wear a bulletproof vest or a wire so as not to blow my cover. I will have many secret cameras in my shirt buttons so that I can catch every angle of the exchange. We will use the evidence to put Nicolai away for good. The next day we show up in the apple orchard where the apples are in full bloom with 20 million dollars for the 30 AK47s. We bring 10 million dollars fewer than Nicolai wants just in case the deal goes bad. We are hoping that there is not going to be any shooting from his 30 man small army; that we will not be running away from a spray of bullets, or falling after contact with a bullet, and a red stream coming out of any of us. Standing in that very apple field I think to myself I might not make it through the bright moonlit night.
is this how we are supposed to do it?
ReplyDeleteDo we just read the passage and talk about what it is about?
ReplyDeleteYou can talk about whatever you want...style/voice/meaning, whatever.
ReplyDeleteexcuse me but "pew pew" is not for bullets, its for ray guns. just thought i would let you know for future reference.
ReplyDeleteaccually, mayaa,,.. every gun has a different sound, Pew Pew can easily describe a silinced pistol. Look it up smarty pants
ReplyDeleteAdam, This is alot like Alex rider, it seems like you took the plot out of the story and made it yours, also, isnt Nicoli from Call of Duty. If this story seemed a little more original, it would've bean funny that you used the name from CoD. (I could be wrong about any if this, its just an opinion)
ReplyDeletegood story adam. pretty interesting. i especially like your lead becasue it got my attention and i wanted to read more.
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