I agree with Horvath ... i like your repetition. Also I like how it is deep but to the point! you dont see many poems like that . . . . they are usually deep OR not very good and to the point. But yours is both (not the not very good part though!!) haahah! overall, i like it and think really anyone could connect to it! great job coll!
I really liked it! I think that its very relatable to everyone and I really liked the ryming throught it. Over all I thought that even though it was short and sweet it still had a lot of meaning. Great job!
WOW this was really good and emotional. It was short but really got your point across which was extremely relatable. I think we have all lost someone or something really speacial to us and you did a great job showing that emotion
This was really good and I think that almost everyone can relate to it like people said before. It was really short, but got right to the point and had a lot of meaning. Good job!
I really liked this poem! It was short and sweet but yet you still showed a lot of emotion and meaning. I also liked your rhythm and how relatable it was. Great job!
Colleen this was excellent. I can relate to this even though I don't know your situation, but as Horvath says, "Short is Good" and in this situation he was right...like always but back to the poem I really liked it
This is such a cute poem. I agree with Ant when he says it has really good emotion. I think that it is very easy to connect to. I hate poems that are long, don't have any emotion, and aren't easy to connect to. It just bugs me.I also agree with Ant when he says we have all lost someone or something really special to us. I wonder who this is about (if it is about anyone)? (btw Colleen you don't need to answer that question) But GREAT JOB! I loved it!
Thanks everyone. Like most of you said this was a very short poem but it had a lot of heart and emotion. This poem was actually written for a few reasons and a few people. The main reason I wrote this was for my dog that I lost just a short time ago, but this poem was also written for my grandma who I lost a while back. I think that this poem is so popular because no matter your situation you can always relate to it.
This is good Col! I liked how it was sweet and short. Well not really sweet but you know, it did not drag on. The rhyming was nice, and it really got the point out quickly. Plus like you said, it can be about any situation!
This was a very good poem! I loved the rhyming and the poem made perfect sense. It also had strong emotion and tone. Good job!
ReplyDeleteGood use of repetition to build rhythm.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Horvath ... i like your repetition.
ReplyDeleteAlso I like how it is deep but to the point! you dont see many poems like that . . . . they are
usually deep OR not very good and to the point. But yours is both (not the not very good part though!!) haahah! overall, i like it and think really anyone could connect to it! great job coll!
I really liked it! I think that its very relatable to everyone and I really liked the ryming throught it. Over all I thought that even though it was short and sweet it still had a lot of meaning. Great job!
ReplyDeleteWOW this was really good and emotional. It was short but really got your point across which was extremely relatable. I think we have all lost someone or something really speacial to us and you did a great job showing that emotion
ReplyDeleteThis was really good and I think that almost everyone can relate to it like people said before. It was really short, but got right to the point and had a lot of meaning. Good job!
ReplyDeleteTotally relatable...I like it. Even though it isn't very long it is still very good! I liked when you said "Another spring and another fall too"
ReplyDeleteI agree with nicole. i think a lot of girls can relate to it. i like it a lot. i also liked that its not too long and its very simple. good job!!
ReplyDeleteI thought it was interesting how short it was. I think some people see poems like Edgar Allen Poe's "The Raven" and think it must be long to be good.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this poem! It was short and sweet but yet you still showed a lot of emotion and meaning. I also liked your rhythm and how relatable it was. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThis poem is really good! It expresses a lot of emotion, but is still short and to the point!
ReplyDeleteThis poem is really good.Even though it is short it is good because it gets your point across. A lot of people can relate to this
ReplyDeleteColleen this was excellent. I can relate to this even though I don't know your situation, but as Horvath says, "Short is Good" and in this situation he was right...like always but back to the poem I really liked it
ReplyDeleteThis is such a cute poem. I agree with Ant when he says it has really good emotion. I think that it is very easy to connect to. I hate poems that are long, don't have any emotion, and aren't easy to connect to. It just bugs me.I also agree with Ant when he says we have all lost someone or something really special to us. I wonder who this is about (if it is about anyone)? (btw Colleen you don't need to answer that question) But GREAT JOB! I loved it!
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ReplyDeleteThanks everyone. Like most of you said this was a very short poem but it had a lot of heart and emotion. This poem was actually written for a few reasons and a few people. The main reason I wrote this was for my dog that I lost just a short time ago, but this poem was also written for my grandma who I lost a while back. I think that this poem is so popular because no matter your situation you can always relate to it.
ReplyDeleteThat peom was so deep! I liked the use of repetiion to make a rhythm! It was sad and I just wanted to hear more! That was really good Colleen!
ReplyDeleteThis is good Col! I liked how it was sweet and short. Well not really sweet but you know, it did not drag on. The rhyming was nice, and it really got the point out quickly. Plus like you said, it can be about any situation!
ReplyDeleteToday January 26th is exactly a year from when he passed :[
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i think that was relly sad but it was good i think that everyone feels that way when they miss someone
ReplyDeleteAwwwww... This poem is really great. Short and sweet. I love it!
ReplyDeleteI love this poem and everyone should read this becuaes this happends to everyone sometime in there life.
ReplyDeleteThis was a short,but sweet poem. It had a great rhythm,which got me to read it. The mood is very sad and it also had good repetition.
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