I am hallow,
like a stringed instrument.
Tap my shell
and it will echo,
pull my strings
and they will vibrate.
Back and forth
within my walls
I hear the sound
being tossed
between
the thin sheets
of instillation.
It hums in my ear
and is all I have
to fill this hallow gap,
inside
and out.
like a stringed instrument.
Tap my shell
and it will echo,
pull my strings
and they will vibrate.
Back and forth
within my walls
I hear the sound
being tossed
between
the thin sheets
of instillation.
It hums in my ear
and is all I have
to fill this hallow gap,
inside
and out.
I like this poem because it was catchy. Now, I'm not a poet and I'm not good at understanding poems but I can still like some and this is one of those. The poem had a flow to it. The part, "Tap my shell | and it will echo, | Pull my strings | and they will vribrate" just kinda went together. I like the cause and effect because you were relating it to yourself. Therefore, I like your poem because it had a ring to it and was catchy.
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