Passion in my vicious red eyes
That is where the Black Swan lies
Dancing across the stage
Building up rage
My insides are burning.....burning
She is stealing the role in the play
So there is a price she has to pay
I will do whatever it will take
To be in the Swan Lake
I grabbed the knife shiny and sharp
It was my turn to play the part
The knife went into her heart
This was officially the start
This is what I have always wanted
I felt it....it was perfect....I was perfect
This is a really good poem! I liked it because of the figurative language, and the metaphors you used. For example, "my insides are burning." I really like how that described how the character was feeling in an interesting way.
ReplyDeleteI agree with kelly. I thought that this was a great poem! You made such a boring event into such an exciting event. You did a great job at expressing the character's feelings and making the character seem believable. I didn't see this movie, but it kinda seems like its based off of the movie The Black Swam. Is it?
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