Together Everyone Achieves More
We work together
We think together
We play together
We win together
We lose together
We fight together
We overcome together
We impact together
We change together
WE are TOGETHER
"Coming together is a beginning, keeping together is a progress, working together is a success."
I had a really difficult time thinking about what to write about. I wanted to do a poem and couldn't think about what to do a poem about. What do you think of it?
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this poem because you used repetition to show your point. Nick repeats We ten times so that the reader understands his point and the Poem has flow. This is great because can be fun for the reader if the poem has good flow and fluency to read. I definitely got his point, "We Are Together". If a reader understand and enjoy a piece of literature they will read another one.
ReplyDeleteWell Nick, it isn't the best poem but its still good. I did enjoy because of the repetitivness. The repeat generated a lot of great flow, and it helped me picture the poem good. This poem brought back some good memories of all the things mentioned. Therfore, the repitition also helped you picture things. Allthough it probably didn't take too long to write, it was enjoyable. Nice job
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