There is a certain cross road between emotional feeling and physical feeling. For some unknown reason we humans are cursed and blessed to experience physical emotions within our fictional hearts planted deep within us.
No words can describe what is sometimes felt. Packed snugly under the folds of your soul your unidentified self starts to tug on the strings, spread into the corners, push against the wall. It is alien for you to react in a way unrecognizable by your own brain, almost frightening that there are layers of you that you have yet to reach under.But it can also be exhilarating.
So why? Why are you forced to deal with the very real part of your boiling blood as it pumps its way through the veins of your unproven soul? I'll tell you the truth, I don't know.
I love this because it describes something we all know and can relate to but is difficult to put into words. However, you managed to do it anyways.
ReplyDeleteI like this piece because this is a question that I ask often to my sel. How can we follow out heart, our gut, if there is no real logical expansion to those feelings, those reactions? It is an unsolvable question. Something we shouldn’t stain about, because no matter how hard we try to find an explosion we always end up at a dead end.
ReplyDeleteThis was an amazing piece Maya, well all your's is haha. But i really enjoyed this because this piece makes me wonder how to put it in words, like how would i explain this piece to someone. And that is exactly what your writing about in this piece. You do really good on connections and it keeps your writing more interesting and questioning.
ReplyDeleteWow this is great! I could go on about things that are good but i really liked how it dug into a topic people don't really think about, but instead just live with everyday.
ReplyDelete&I liked the clincher because it ends your writing without really ending it by leaving the matter unsettled
I like this piece because it lets us think about the cross between our physical emotions and emotions inside.
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