My cappilaries burst when I see you
And this is not a hyperbole because you can see my bloodshot eyes
Being near you is like being stabbed
And this is not a simile because I have the scars
My brain tells me to get away
And this is not personification because I can hear the voices
These are not examples of figurative language
These are just my feelings towards you
Anthony, this is beyond good, I really understand what your saying in this, about how your feelings are so strong that there is no figurative language in this, its how you feel. I love this! Great use of "no" figurative language
ReplyDeleteI think this is good poem because you use a good symbol .For example in the poem it states,"And this is not a simile because I have the scars."Therefore this shows your poem is good because the figurative language is a symbol for feelings.
ReplyDeleteI think that this poem was really good especially because this poem showed feelings/emotion and it shows figurative language put together as one. Even though this poem was really short, you put this poem in a way that it shows the types of figurative languages you are talking about, but they are actually your feelings. Therefore, this poem all in all was well written.
ReplyDeleteI think that this poem was good because it is personal and has good imagery. I can picture the bloodshot eyes, the stab marks, and I can hear the brain telling him things. This good imagery makes this short poem very good. Therfore imagery makes poem good.
ReplyDeletewow this is a really intense poem. I like how dramatic it is and it has a strong meaning in it. Very good imagery in this poem as well. It showed a lot of feeling and anger and i thought that was great.
ReplyDeleteI think this poem was great because of its emotion. For example, "Being near you is like being stabbed" is a sentence of strong emotion and hatred. This makes a poem better because it now has tone. Therefore, the poem was well written and interesting to read because of the feeling of it.
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