Pressure
Pressure is the weight of a 5 ton anvil
squeezing you until you burst the word yes.
Pressure can over ride someone’s continence
like a computer virus hacking software.
Pressure can cause someone to do some thing bad
while the person is herring voices inside there head with guilt so strong
it chills their spine from the inside out.
Pressure will turn some ones mind to the devil.
Unless their hearts with god.
The pressure to ace a test is different than all the others that destroy who you really are.
This pressure emphasis’s it
And shows that you can do anything.
The pressure and force of the law
makes the streets a better place.
It makes the pedestrians feel,
Safer
Secure
Stronger
So they don’t fall into the black vortex of evil pressure that smothers the word,
“NO”
Not to be mean, I'm just a truthful person, but this poem is cliche. It does have some good imagery but being a overused theme you need to make it very good for it to be anything more than another teenage agnsty poem.
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