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Tuesday, June 14, 2011
How You Live
Your work ethic is not given to you you have to earn it. You have to have a good work ethic or you will fail in life. Your work ethic means the world because if you don’t work you don’t make money you don’t eat you don’t live you die
I really liked this poem because it is a great message how people have to work and put in an effort to live. I takes effort to do everything in this world and you wrote it very well in a poem style. Therefore, you had a great massage in your poem to the reader.
I agree with Jeff, you do need effort for anything in this world, things don't always just come to you, and if they do you'll never know how to be independent or work for something on your own. This was a great message to get across Connor!
I really liked this poem because it is a great message how people have to work and put in an effort to live. I takes effort to do everything in this world and you wrote it very well in a poem style. Therefore, you had a great massage in your poem to the reader.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jeff, you do need effort for anything in this world, things don't always just come to you, and if they do you'll never know how to be independent or work for something on your own. This was a great message to get across Connor!
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