Wednesday, June 15, 2011

Man's Best Friend

He follows you,
where ever you go
or have gone.

He's just with you
that's the thing

By your side
standing tall

Ready,
Prepared,
Ordered.

He's your mate,
your protector
what he is born to do
he take it down for you
just for you

2 comments:

  1. I liked this because you made us think who or what "he" was. You could have come out and said it, but it would have been boring and the story wouldnt be meaningful. we had to interpret the title to find out who or what it was. Therefore, it was a meaningful and show not tell poem.

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  2. I like this poem because "He" is whoever we want it to be. Everybody needs a buddy like that and we can all connect to this poem.

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