A line is something more because it can represent other things. A line could represent a border between lines or the stock market changing day by day. Therefore a line is not just a line it is anything in the universe that can be represented.
A line is definitely something more. I can tell what you were thinking when you wrote this. A little more Figurative Language maybe and imagery would do the touch to make this a real good poem because the poem right now itself is just like a thrown out question like, "what is a line?" Maybe a little more feeling into it would to the trick. Therefore, if you add more imagery, we can image what your idea of a line is.
A line is something more because it can represent other things. A line could represent a border between lines or the stock market changing day by day. Therefore a line is not just a line it is anything in the universe that can be represented.
ReplyDeleteA line is definitely something more. I can tell what you were thinking when you wrote this. A little more Figurative Language maybe and imagery would do the touch to make this a real good poem because the poem right now itself is just like a thrown out question like, "what is a line?" Maybe a little more feeling into it would to the trick. Therefore, if you add more imagery, we can image what your idea of a line is.
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