Love,
It keeps the world together.
It keeps us together.
Love,
It makes me feel all warm and tingly inside.
It makes me have a smile from ear to ear.
Actually, it kind of makes me want to scream.
But then again …
Love,
It makes me want to tear my heart out.
It makes me hurt on the inside and out.
When it’s over, it feels like a knife being stabbed into my gut.
It feels like everything is slowly slipping away,
Out of my reach and into thin air.
Love,
It suffocates.
But, it’s real.
Love,
It’s so weird.
Mein gott! Cliche!! Oh so cliche! Im sorry, but I'm naturally harsh. So don't think I'm trying to be mean.... But this poem was so undeniably cliche I swear I read it on this blog three times before. It also doesn't have much imagery or symbolism which makes it ...not much of a poem. Try adding images that symbolize you idea.... And a less cliched idea would help too.
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