The girl sits alone.
like a princess,
from a far away land.
She day dreams,
thinking no one notices,
but he does.
From far away
they lock gazes,
their eyes searching like a mouse,
creeping around an apartment,
one where he doesn’t belong.
Like the boy,
who doesn’t belong.
Until his red Reeboks hit the pavement
pounding the ground
till he stops
and finally sits down.
This poem was good because it used good figurative language. For example, in the poem it says, "The girl sits alone, like a princess." I thought this was good because it describes how the girl is sitting and not just saying that she is sitting alone. Therefore, the figurative language in this piece went with the poem. Good Job Jenna!!
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