I also really liked this poem because of how you kept referring to plants like weeds and trees. If you related all of your lines to something in nature it might make it better but it was still really good and very clever. Also, like Georgina said, I liked how you kept making it rhyme.
I really liked this poem because how easy it is to relate to it, and just the way you stated everything was interesting and I really enjoyed it. You kinda scared me about the world ending, but other than that, good job Lily!
This was really good but I feel that you could have explained more. For example, I think that some of the lines end too quickly. One of these would be, "It's like a weed..." Right here, I feel like you could have expanded it more. Other than that though I thought it was ok. Therefore this poem could be improved if wanted but well done.
This was a really cute poem. I loved the rhyming. My favorite part would be
ReplyDelete" You can't escape it
It's like and addiction
You can't control it
It's like a weed
You can't tame it
Like a tree
It never stops growing"
Overall, I liked your poem lily! Keep it up.
I also really liked this poem because of how you kept referring to plants like weeds and trees. If you related all of your lines to something in nature it might make it better but it was still really good and very clever. Also, like Georgina said, I liked how you kept making it rhyme.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this poem because how easy it is to relate to it, and just the way you stated everything was interesting and I really enjoyed it. You kinda scared me about the world ending, but other than that, good job Lily!
ReplyDeleteThis was really good but I feel that you could have explained more. For example, I think that some of the lines end too quickly. One of these would be, "It's like a weed..." Right here, I feel like you could have expanded it more. Other than that though I thought it was ok. Therefore this poem could be improved if wanted but well done.
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