Tuesday, April 12, 2011

What if there was no water? what if there was no air? What if there were no plants? What if there were no animals? What if there were no humans? What if there was no Earth? What if there was no sun? What if there was no solar system? What if there was no Milky Way galaxy? What if there was universe? Then what would there be?
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  1. ColleenApril 12, 2011 at 4:36 PM

    I like how you tried to use repition for effect but I personally don't think it worked. I think you over used it and you didnt use it in a way that really caught my eye. Good try though (:

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  2. KatieApril 12, 2011 at 5:25 PM

    I would have t agree with Colleen because it really wasn't that intersting and i didn't get hooked. But good try.

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  3. Andrew C.April 13, 2011 at 5:14 PM

    this was not that great because it was not interesting. The lead was not that drastic. It states,"What if there was no water?" There is water, so i can not connect. Therefore, i have already lost focus, and will not enjoy the piece.

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