Connor I think this is a great topic to write about because we had a big winter with a lot of snow. so now I think you are right lets move on to spring.
I disagree with Jeff. I think this piece was lacking literary device. This poem was not confusing like most poems are supposed to be. This poem did not leave me curious and thinking. I think you can definitley do better Connor!
I agree with Kristen. There was barley any literary device in this piece of writing. Plus nothing caught my attention. You could have described the sound of the birds singing in the trees, or the excitement of the ice cream trucks coming. Therefor, i believe that this poem was very weak
Connor I think this is a great topic to write about because we had a big winter with a lot of snow. so now I think you are right lets move on to spring.
ReplyDeleteI disagree with Jeff. I think this piece was lacking literary device. This poem was not confusing like most poems are supposed to be. This poem did not leave me curious and thinking. I think you can definitley do better Connor!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Kristen. There was barley any literary device in this piece of writing. Plus nothing caught my attention. You could have described the sound of the birds singing in the trees, or the excitement of the ice cream trucks coming. Therefor, i believe that this poem was very weak
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