This was a very well written piece, because of the strong theme. For example, you get right to your theme by saying we all have to have a role model, or someone to strive towards. Therefore, since you theme is very stong, i think this was a very well written piece. Nice job Nicky.
I like the creativeness because of the bolded HE on every line. I haven't seen a poem like this before and it was great that you came up with that. Also, it got me interested because it caught my eye. Therefore, this poem was interesting and unique.
This was a very well written piece, because of the strong theme. For example, you get right to your theme by saying we all have to have a role model, or someone to strive towards. Therefore, since you theme is very stong, i think this was a very well written piece. Nice job Nicky.
ReplyDeleteI like the creativeness because of the bolded HE on every line. I haven't seen a poem like this before and it was great that you came up with that. Also, it got me interested because it caught my eye. Therefore, this poem was interesting and unique.
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