For the one who is always there.
For the one who broke me many times.
For the one who believed in me when I didn't.
For the one who is always up for a good laugh.
For the one who is only there to point out my flaws.
For the one who is never afraid to be themself.
For the one who constantly has a smile on their face.
For the one who is a good listener.
For the one who always needs to be the center of attention.
And for all the people who have come and gone throughout my life and the ones that are still here, thank you because you guys made me who I am today.
This is great because of two things. First off, the repetition was excellent. I was not too annoyed by it, and it kept me hooked, so that is a huge positive. Also, this is very personal and is the truth. Those kinds of people do affect how a person becomes themselves, and I am certain everyone can agree with that. Hence, this piece is definitely worth reading.
ReplyDeleteI think this was very good and really effective because the repetition was great. It always started off with, "For the one". It always made me wonder what the next line was going to be about. Therefore, the repetition made this poem very effective.
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