Decent poem. I thought that the repetition was good because you used No more a lot. Maybe some other literary devices would do the trick. Also, at the end you stated, "Now can the summer come?" This was an excellent clincher or ending. When I read this for the first time, I thought that the ending left me curious for what summer was going to be about and how it will compare to sprng like how spring is compared to winter. Therefore, this poem leaves the reader thinking about what the writer is going to put and write about in the summer poem.
Decent poem. I thought that the repetition was good because you used No more a lot. Maybe some other literary devices would do the trick. Also, at the end you stated, "Now can the summer come?" This was an excellent clincher or ending. When I read this for the first time, I thought that the ending left me curious for what summer was going to be about and how it will compare to sprng like how spring is compared to winter. Therefore, this poem leaves the reader thinking about what the writer is going to put and write about in the summer poem.
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