Pain is temporary, Pain is in our head.
Pain cannot hurt me, Pain isn't strong
Be tough, Don't be a baby
They are just words, said to me daily
Pain can last, Pain exists
Pain can hurt me, Pain is tough
I try to act tough, It try not to be a baby
These are more than just words, said to me daily
Pain lasts forever, Pain is all around
Pain does hurt me, Pain is stronger than i am
Words cause pain, even more than actions do,
so think before you speak, because pain does hurt.
Ant you made a very good writing piece because of the point you made. People today still say that "sticks and stones break my bones and words will never hurt me" well you made a good point saying that words do hurt so be careful of what you say. Therefore you showed and told people a great point in your writing.
ReplyDeleteI like this writing piece because you had a change in the point of view. At first you were saying how pain was nothing and how it was all in your head, then towards the end you changed it and decided that pain was the enemy and there was no way of escaping it. That is great writing because it is very interesting!
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