Live
Laugh
Love
It's always those three words.
Three small words.
Yet, they are so significant.
Live - every day as it is your last
Laugh - at your mistakes... everybody makes them
Love - the people that surround you
Three words.
All built around one.
LIFE.
Live - your LIFE
Laugh - at the mistakes you make in LIFE
Love - the people in your LIFE
Three words.
One meaning.
One life.
I thought that this poem was really good because of the emphasis you put on the different words. For example, you highlighted the main words you were talking about, and then Life, which is the word that the others revolved around. Therefore, this is a great piece!
ReplyDeleteI thought that this was REALLY good! I loved it because you took three words that everyone knows and turned them into something meaningful. Some people don't think past the words, but you went above and be on zozo! An example is when you defined the three words. It states, "Live -every day as it is your last
ReplyDeleteLaugh - at your mistakes... everybody makes them
Love - the people that surround you." Laugh is my favorite because it is so true. Everyone does make mistakes and you should never feel like its just you. But over all, this is one of my favorite poems :) good jobb!
This is really good Zoe! I thought this was a great poem because the poem is so true. Although people normally talk about love being the strongest word, it's not the only one that revolves around life. Therefore, I loved why you included laugh and live because those three words are what make up life.
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