Monday, April 11, 2011

It Was Him

It Was Him without a noise without a step without a breath It Was Him without a sigh without a lie without a cry It was Him without a but without a stomp without a bleep It Was Him without a thought without a word without a point It Was Him without a deal without a fist and without a blush, All I know is, It Was Him.
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3 comments:

  1. Joey M.April 11, 2011 at 7:10 PM

    This story was interesting. It had good repetition of, “It was him". There for I liked it.

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  2. willApril 11, 2011 at 9:12 PM

    I thought this story was alright. I thought it was alright because it had some good features to it like the repetion for effect, but on the other hand it was really short. Therefore I think this story is alright because has some good and bad features

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  3. SousaApril 13, 2011 at 3:30 PM

    Is there anymore other kinds of writing tricks that I could have added?

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