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Saturday, April 30, 2011
Who I am
Who needs, i'll provide Who loves , i'll share Who sees , i'll notice Who hates , i'll ignore Who fears , i'll be strong Who dreams , i'll imagine Who has found poems , i'm leann
Really great job Leann! Just like Colleen said, the repitition is definatly a big plus for this poem because it makes it all flow really well together as a whole piece.The "Who" and "I'll" parts of each line make the poem rythmic. Therefore, this was really a well written poem! Awesome job!
This is a good poem because of the use of repetition. For example you use the word who at the beggining of each line. Therefore the use of repetiton reiterateed the point of the poem that someone is asking and answering questions. Good job.
This is a great poem because you used repetition effectively. For example, each line you used, "who", and, "i'll", effectively. Therefore, this is great because you used repetition for effect, very well.
Like mostly everybody said, this poem was great because of the repetition. For example, every stanza (with the exception of the last one) said "Who ___, I'll ___." which is a good use of repetition for effect. Therefore, because of those repeating words, this was a good piece!
This poem was very good because of the repitition. For example, all the stanzas start with who. This really does add a great effect to the poem. This also gives the poem great rhythm. The poem really flowed when I read it and made the poem a lot better. Therefore, this poem was very good for its repetition and rhythm.
As everyone is saying, this poem was great. I liked the repetition for effect. An example of repetition is when you would being your lines with who and end with I’ll. I really liked the end when you changed the I’ll to I’m. It states, "Who has found poems , I’m leann." This I thought was very bold. Therefore, I loved it.
This poem was really good because you used repetiontion for effect. The use of effect made the hole poem. Therefore you did a really good jog with this poem.
This was a really creative poem. Like everyone said, the repetition for effect made it interesting. I also liked the end, "Who has found poems , i'm leann." I thought that was really creative as well. I havent read a poem like this one before, and that's why I liked it so much!
I think its really good. You used repition for effect nicely and like Kelly said, I like how you added at the end "Who has found poems, i'm leann" It kind of makes it more personal. I liked it alot! Good job
This is a very good poem because of the repetition. For example, you started every line with "Who" and then "I'll". This added repetition for effect and made this poem so good. Therefore since you used repetition for effect, your poem was very good. Nice job.
This poem was great. It had wonderful repetition. On most of the lines it would say "Who" and "I'll". The only thing I didn’t like was the last sentence, you could have put something better. Over all it was pretty good.
WOW leann, this was amazing. I love how you used repetition for effect and rythem. this is definitely your best piece so far. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteReally great job Leann! Just like Colleen said, the repitition is definatly a big plus for this poem because it makes it all flow really well together as a whole piece.The "Who" and "I'll" parts of each line make the poem rythmic. Therefore, this was really a well written poem! Awesome job!
ReplyDeleteThis is a good poem because of the use of repetition. For example you use the word who at the beggining of each line. Therefore the use of repetiton reiterateed the point of the poem that someone is asking and answering questions. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great poem because you used repetition effectively. For example, each line you used, "who", and, "i'll", effectively. Therefore, this is great because you used repetition for effect, very well.
ReplyDeleteIs the legit shape of the poem meant to be like a curve/wave thing or was that just a coincedence?
ReplyDeleteLike mostly everybody said, this poem was great because of the repetition. For example, every stanza (with the exception of the last one) said "Who ___, I'll ___." which is a good use of repetition for effect. Therefore, because of those repeating words, this was a good piece!
ReplyDeleteThis poem was very good because of the repitition. For example, all the stanzas start with who. This really does add a great effect to the poem. This also gives the poem great rhythm. The poem really flowed when I read it and made the poem a lot better. Therefore, this poem was very good for its repetition and rhythm.
ReplyDeleteAs everyone is saying, this poem was great. I liked the repetition for effect. An example of repetition is when you would being your lines with who and end with I’ll. I really liked the end when you changed the I’ll to I’m. It states, "Who has found poems , I’m leann." This I thought was very bold. Therefore, I loved it.
ReplyDeleteThis poem was really good because you used repetiontion for effect. The use of effect made the hole poem. Therefore you did a really good jog with this poem.
ReplyDeleteThis was a really creative poem. Like everyone said, the repetition for effect made it interesting. I also liked the end, "Who has found poems , i'm leann." I thought that was really creative as well. I havent read a poem like this one before, and that's why I liked it so much!
ReplyDeleteI think its really good. You used repition for effect nicely and like Kelly said, I like how you added at the end "Who has found poems, i'm leann" It kind of makes it more personal. I liked it alot! Good job
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good poem because of the repetition. For example, you started every line with "Who" and then "I'll". This added repetition for effect and made this poem so good. Therefore since you used repetition for effect, your poem was very good. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteThis poem was great. It had wonderful repetition. On most of the lines it would say "Who" and "I'll". The only thing I didn’t like was the last sentence, you could have put something better. Over all it was pretty good.
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